We all in the life always have shared our adventures, experiencies, friendship, secrets, with someone, and this person begins to form a part of our life as OUR BEST FRIEND.
But, to me, THE BEST FRIEND is that person who fills my life of total satisfaction, of happiness, of light and who is over any earthly love. This person is not one, are two, and they are my children, RICARDO JOSE AND ALBERTO MARIO.
Ricardo José is 16 years old and is very ripe, Intelligent slightly serios child. In the study he is excellent and is a great friend. But he is very disorganized in the house, everything it leaves wire drawing.
Alberto Mario is 9 years old, he is very affectionate with his parents, is obedient, but he has badly genius. It is necessary to speak to him softly in order that he does not feel scolded. Also he is very talented and is very organized.
my children are generous, friendly humble and very competitive.
Finally, apart from being my big friends, they are all my live.
Hi Ricardo...!! I liked your composition because I think that all in our families are friends!!.. well I just want to comment that in the third paragraph You wrote serios and is serious. Ok bye!!
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ResponderEliminarI THINK ALL THE PEOPLE IS VERY INTERESTING AND EVERYONE HAVE SOMETHING TO CONTRIBUTE, BY THE WAY; YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT CONTRIBUTE, BUT YOU'VE WRITTEN THREE MISTAKES, THE FIRST IS IN THE FOURTH PARAGRAPH WHEN YOU SAY "SERIOS", THE SECOND IS ONE ADVICE FOR YOU "DON'T TICK THE WORDS IN ENGLISH"(JOSÉ). FINALLY, THE THIRD IS IN THE END OF YOUR COMPOSITION IS "ALL MY LIFE"
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